knights-td-f

=The Knights Who Say Ning=

Tech Doc Feedback

 * readability - fine, but needs some diagrams and tables;
 * target platform - no mention of Wii Ware in the 1st para, but it appears later on; also Android disappears to be replaced apparently by iPhone;
 * plan - you have two PC betas and no alpha; nothing ever gets past beta - really?;
 * dev kit - major lack of detail, especially if you intend to hit 'everything';
 * staffing - OK, that's who you have; but you clearly have no idea what you actually need. Staffing is the biggest cost and you need some clear detail of, at least, cost per person;
 * costing & payback - again, we need to see numbers.

Summary - too much waffle and not enough numbers.

//Draft Mark: 30%//

Final Feedback: A big improvement from your original submission. You still need to justify your costs a bit.


 * Final Mark: 55%**