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Tech Doc Feedback

 * readability - as this is an online doc (bettr in HTML, IMHO) you should hot link from keywords either to footnotes or direct to online links from the footnotes or the main text; that way people can quickly do "Python", etc; gimme some pictuires, tables and numbers to rbeak up the text;


 * target platform - be a bit more exact in why Python over C++ and Flash;


 * Staffing - might be OK ...


 * costing - good realistic numbers;


 * payback - no numbers?

Summary - looks a good start but feels it needs some more detail.

//Draft mark: 45%//

Final feedback: Realistic looking, but needs some more detail, particularly in how you are going to schedule the workload.


 * Final mark: 50%**