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=Introduction to Game Design=

Game Design doc feedback
Alan Wong

http://faihoi.wikispaces.com/

OK & clear intro - but //**what is the game**//? Start by telling me the basic game idea. What you have told me is the mechanics of the game. Who am I shooting, why, where, when ...

Well done making attempts to sketch and model the characters. Keep at it and you'll get better as time progresses. I liked the robot model! Ta for the music link too. I'm not sure exactly who would want to pay for and play the game; think a bit more about this.

Overall the doc cover many aspects of the game, but there is a need to create a more coherent final doc. Start by telling the reader what the game is about (mebbes move section III to I). I'm not sure how you have managed to create links to imagery instead of embedded imagery which appears as soon as the wikispaces page is loaded; investigate and fix. Put in some putative screen shots of the game in use.

//Dr John//