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=**Introduction to Games Design**=

**Design Docs feedback**
Greg Johnston

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Such a neat, small game idea. I like it and agree it is attractive to younger children. Any younger than that and ghosts can still be quite frightening (ever seen one ... ? - eek!)

The document sells me well the idea of the game, but i'd want to know more about it before I gave you ££, which is an important game design doc purpose - to extract dosh from funders.

So, add some pictures, screen shots, characters, level designs, sounds, music, etc. So, populate your design doc with these too, and sell me the whole game idea.

//Dr John.//