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=**Introduction to Games Design**=

**Design Docs feedback page**
Jack Chalmers

@http://mygamedesign.yolasite.com/

Hey - cool image at the start - did you do this yourself? Mebbes restructure this website later as a general eportfolio site for your work.

Gimme a one sentence summary of the entire game first, then an abstract, then this story ...

This is all good imagery. Can you create a two-person game in Scratch? That would be awesome as I only ever see one-person games or animations. You will learn a lot in the course of creating a 2-player game, about how Scratch threads work.

The excellent imagery continues. Careful with any material you source from anywhere as you don't know if you can really use it in a commercial game. For the purposes of this exercise it is OK, but the closer your work gets to a reality - which this game may eventually be if it all goes OK - the more care you need to take with IP. Mebbes copy in somewhere the copyright and use statements from polybeast.de

Overall - move the last page to the start. Create the game. Very good so far.

//Dr John.//