neon-td-f

=Neon Flash Pansies=

Tech Doc Feedback

 * readability - am I looking in the right place (http://neonflashpanzies.wikispaces.com) cos its hard to navigate - use some links to the doc top pages;


 * target platform - I didn't know Python was on XBox and that it was slow - any links you could add here?; yes they would cost money;


 * Staffing - yep, you would need some people


 * costing - and this might cost some money; the costings needs real numbers added; forget the factory packaging costs just allow to get around 10% max of the shop box cost;


 * payback - and whoever bankrolled you (unless you are Dubian) will want the dosh back

Summary - mmm ... OK you got the ehadings and the general idea, but need to add a lot more real numbers now if this document is going to get a pass grade.

//Draft mark: 15%//

Final feedback: An improvement has been made, but still a lot could be done. Needs diagrams, more detail, and justifications. Please remove the inapproriate pictures, and try to take coursework submissions a little more seriously in the future!


 * Final mark: 35%**