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=**Introduction to Games Design**=

**Design Docs feedback**
Chris Urquhart

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This is a clear document. The title is clear and simple. The game is outlined at the start. Maybe think more about what the win scenario will be (just a screen flashing 'winner'?). The back story is good, and how long and the quality of its presentation depends on the game length, etc. This could be quite a large game, and sounds quite parent-friendly so likely to be 12 or lower. The idea of escape games/stories go back a long time and are always a good one to build upon.

Unfortunately I could not load the imagery. Why don't you have this pre-uploaded on the wikispace page rather than click-to-load as on my pages (see http://wosgames.wikispaces.com/). We need to think about the music and sound effects. And you also need to think about how big this game might be - it could be 15 mins per level or 30 hours overall.

But, a good, clear start. Just finish it off now ...

//Dr John//