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=Introduction to Games Development=

Design Doc feedback
Lee MacLeod

Submitted as a docx file ... no URL given

Where's your URL? This document was supposed to be presented online (HTML) rather than a word document. You emailed me the document and said you would try and get it uploaded, but never sent me the URL ... please don't use docx as it makes people like John who use a Mac cry as he can't open them :(

Document seems quite rushed as though it's been done as an afterthought. I get the general idea, it's space invaders with praying mantis-like alien beings, but the presentation of the document isn't very good. The assignment was "5 internet pages", while quite vague, we were expecting a bit more than 4 A4 pages, one as the title page, one is blank, one has a single screenshot on it, and all the description is crammed into a single page. Split up your text using titles rather than just block capitals at the beginning of your paragraphs, expand on the detail you've given, and throw in some concept art and/or diagrams.

Remember, you're supposed to be selling your idea.

Derek.