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Sean McGrevey

grade: 62%

Great to see so much use of 'I' - this is your reflection for you which I happen to be reading. Be real and don't try to stick stuff in which didn't happen/feel at the time (I'm not suggesting you have done this) as this is you thinking out loud, not talking to anyone but you. You saw team problems early - they *can* be so difficult to tackle. The rest of the this-is-what-we-did is OK - it's all grist to the mill of the important reflection.

Name names. Don't say 'a member' - be explicit. Success and failure in all projects is down to the team and its members. I have had to 'shop' wasters in the past, you will too. Go for it, cos your job and success depend on a strong team pulling their weight as much as you do.

Overall - a strong piece, with good clear thoughts, that might be persuaded in future to pull its punches less.