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Jonathan Callaghan

Grade: 62%

Good opening para. Sets the scene and concentrates the mind of the writer as well as the reader. What follows is a clear summary of events. The reflections are good, but not great. Take this positively and encouragingly! They are the basis of some very useful musings, but you need now to say: and now I will do this. So, how do you intend to put these thoughts into practice? if you are going to use a tablet: which one? when? for what? If you are going to be better organised: how? How do you make sure you work in teams where you are so positively supported and encouraged? I'd suggest one way is to ask for this at interview; interviewees tend to forget that an interview is also you interviewing the company to see if you want to work for them. Be proactive - or, rather, continue to be proactive.

So, good work.