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=Introduction to Games Development=

Design Doc feedback
James Hodgart/Steven Logan/James Moore

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First of all, it's supposed to be an online document, i.e. HTML pages rather than a downloadable file. Please don't submit anything as a docx file as it needs M$ Office 2007 to open it, which some of the lecturers may not have.

Nicely laid out document, makes it easy to read through. The contents page is split up well so that these could be links to other pages if it were an online document. Good idea for the game, well presented, so anyone reading the document has a fair idea of what the game would be like when developed. Concept art has been placed well in the document to break up the text, maybe add in a small diagram of the key layout?

All in all, a very good design doc (except for the non-online aspect), with just one thing I would like to see added ... as this is a group project, who is going to be responsible for what in the development?

Derek.