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=**Introduction to Games Design**=

**Design Docs feedback**
Sebastian Marchadour

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If its in Scratch it need not be for MS Windows as it will run under HTML web and on Macs. You can even get it to work under Linux, I hear.

The level design sounds very generic. I suppose it is every level, so you need to think about what makes each level kinda different, IMHO.

I do like the idea of using silly sounds made by people. Kinda like the mobile phone ring sound 'Ring! Ring!' Very silly.

Overall it holds well together, but I think you need to give some ideas as to what it all looks like. You might want a final uber-boss who is too big to fit on a Scratch stage; that would terrify. Each boss should be quite different too, as to a lesser extent possibly should the hazards and fighters of each level.

So, I buy the basic idea, but want to see in more detail what the game looks and plays like.

//Dr John.//