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=**Introduction to Games Design**=

**Design Docs feedback**
Robert Clark

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Mmmm ... sounds kinda familiar (or is that familial?)

Anyhoo, honest saying its for time wasting. This is actually a recognised genre/market.

Nice honest background statement too. Fine in this context, but would need to be elided in a full design document for others to see.

Mmmm ... not much here actually in toto. So you need to beef it up somewhat. Indeed, most of it is simply saying it is Galaxian with Cpt Suth. Kinda thin. You need to say a lot more to sell me the idea as worth developing, and worth putting ££ into (which is a major purpose of a design doc.)

So - more detail. Sell me the game you want to dev.

//Dr John.//