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=**Introduction to Games Design**=

**Design Docs feedback**
Adam Kale

@http://adam-kale.yolasite.com/

Interesting idea. I confess - I've never seen the series (I don't watch TV any more; dull (me or it??)). The IP is clearly owned and would be fought vigorously over if you actually did this game. Would it be possible to do a generic annoying child looking for lost teddy game? (think before you answer ...)

As to the platform, I agree that as things stand today, this is not an easy one to answer quickly. I keep getting distracted by such as the new N900. is there a future for hand-held consoles in a world of touch-screen smart phones?

Not sure about the kill-your-mom ending. This could up the rating somewhat and limit the marketplace. I thought this was a mild TV series. Nice concept art - thanks! Good imagery on visual style - is this yours?

Overall - a comprehensive document that fits in with a current franchise (sorry I don't know it; can't know everything!) There are issues of IP ownership you might wish to more clearly acknowledge. The document is text heavy and could do with more white space or imagery or change of font to make it easier on the eye. it comes across right now as a tad dull - sell the idea!