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=**Introduction to Games Design**=

**Design Docs feedback**
Joanne Lawrie

http://joannelawrie.wikispaces.com/ Well, just because Pong Rewired isn't being sold doesn't mean someone doesn't own it. IP for games all belongs to someone as nothing is over 75 years old (when copyright expires.) Doesn't matter for this purpose, but watch this in future work.

Interesting to see a two-player Scratch game; not many of them out there. In general, give me some piccies to play in my mind with. One image not loading, and I'm not sure what the third one is for.

Overall - remember you are selling the idea of the game to the reader. I should get the game very quickly (which I did), the you should lead me clearly through all concepts to make sure I buy it at the end of the doc. this doesn't happen very well as you seem to be taking more to yourself in other parts of the doc - i.e. assuming the reader knows what you are talking about.

So, stop, and carefully populate the document with clear and simple text and pictures to tell me exactly what the game will do.

//Dr John.//