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Anthony Walsh

@http://anthonywalsh.yolasite.com/

Good'n'easy to understand and get into. Could do with some early oxine graphics and explosions to concentrate the mind. This is a simple and easy document to follow. You could do with some extra stuff on the human characters as I thought they were bulls at first. SO, get someone else to read it who doesn't know the game, and tell you if it flows clearly. I'd also do some layout to lighten things up, as most of it is heavily almost bullet-pointed.

Add some links to music (Spanish?) and sound fx. Can you find suitable imagery rather than stick-man? FOr the final doc you need to do this, I reckon.

Maybe a bit more on the target demographics and why someone should support your writing this game. COs, overall it feels smirky but not laugh-out-loud. Is there a spin missing that could be added - like mad cow disease? - to make it more like a Worms style game?

So - lighten up the document, and see if the idea will travel further.

//Dr John.//