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David Campbell

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Well, the intro is clear. Not sure who zombie fans are ... but judging by the imagery they are an icon of some kind.

I like the Bib character and his dead parrot. There is a tiny loose end: what are zombies doing now that Bob does not approve of?

What an interesting idea that two AI group battle each other, and Bob is the guy who moves events on. This is an intersting- nay, challenging - scenario. You'll need to think this through and write out a complete level, IMHO, to test the idea as a game and to see how hard it would be to do.

Overall - a great idea, great characters, almost-great scenario (I'm still a bit what-are-the-zombies-doing-wrong confused), with scope to add other things. I'd usually say something about target hardware, etc., but I don't care as here it seems to be the idea as a game that needs developed. Leave hardware concerns for now.

//Dr John.//