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All of the images will be created using such free programmes such as Paint.NET and MS Paint which will then be put into arrays" What? Arrays doesn't seem to be what you mean ... image strips for animation?
 * readability - supposed to be an online document (HTML pages). Don't use docx as John can't open them on his Mac (needs a real computer). Remove the UWS logo if you wish to retain ownership, otherwise they can steal it - Derek
 * target platform - big difference between XNA and Flash ... flash isn't free (£500ish)
 * dev kit - "
 * staffing - nice clean task breakdown. easy to follow and amend if things turn out differently
 * costing - free to dev while students, but need to pay to release commercially.
 * payback - Clean model "if we make a profit, good, if we don't, no big loss".

Summary - Seems quite a good tech document with one major concern: define the line between free student dev and commercial product you get money for

//Draft mark: 35%//

Final feedback: Apart from the task breakdown, there is too much text and not enough diagrams or tables.


 * Final mark: 45%**