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=**Introduction to Games Design**=

**Design Docs feedback**
Sean Hamilton

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The one sentence doesn't say what the game is about - sell me the IDEA of the game, not its mechanics. Not sure why this is an online game. I like the targets - have you thought about psychadelic spinning/colour changing targets too?

Overall a clean site, which is a major part of the battle. but you need to add more detail on the actual game: why are you killing these things/hitting targets, what are the difficulty levels, what will a screen look like, will the background change, what will the backgrounds be, what will the music and sound fx be, etc.

A good start, but beef it up a bit more.

//Dr John//