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=Jonathan Mearns=


 * clips** - nice group of fotos. Better put in an album, I reckon. No video clips of the game in action? Pity. So, good start, but classify the fotos and add a couple of good vidclips. B2 (52%)


 * personal report** - a fair account of events, even a little reflection at the end. There is little can be done about non-publication of the 3rd book, so a reflection upon this would have been good - what would you do if something were not available next time? I suppose the comment re an artist/animator is a good one, but the answer you give is obvious! The lack of something critical you thought you'd get is more problematic, less foreseebale, but critical to the project. So ... what would you do next time to (i) know what is critical (ii) plan for the event (iii) act upon the event? Overall, OK - B2 (57%)


 * QA Plan** - the QA plan is a good copy of the QA document, but does not show such as timings, target audiences, data analysis approaches, actions planned, etc. A plan should say all these things too - D (32%)


 * roll-out plan** - there is a little bit at the end of page 25 and 26 of the design document supplied. It does show some detail, but again falls short of a proper plan. This worries me - the class seems to have no idea what a planning document or process actually is. I'll need to think about hiow this affects the group honours projects next year to ensure you catch up on this - D (25%)


 * QA data presentation** - this is done neatly and well. I can see the numbers, which aren't exaggerated (e.g. the right number of significant digits is presented) and words aren't subsumed by numbers in the presentation. Nothing is hid. A clean report. B1 (62%)


 * QA data analysis** - this is also well presented. I like the reflective though, responding not just emotionally to players comments, but thinking which ones actually mean anything, in your opinion, and proposing improvements which could be made. A good analysis from such small data (which isn't a criticism of the dataset, just an acknowledgement of its size.) A (75%)