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=**Introduction to Games Design**=

**Design Doc feedback**
Kieran Nelson

http://darkarts.free-hostin.com/Website/Desing%20doc.html

Looks like a eat wee idea. The notion of a grand plan to get to The Moon is cutesey as everyone knows the moon (unlike the 'Megalon Quadrant of the Nandralon Sector' kind of geeksie market-limiter.) I take it this is mainly for retro enjoyers? With the right graphics it might also be good for kids. Its very parent-friendly too. What do you reckon: £3 download from an App Store? Or a freebie hook to a bigger game? How long would it take to write? What would it cost to write? Just my thoughts ...

The in-a-sentence is a bit too short. Mebbes choose clever fonts, watermarking, etc. to give the final doc the perfect look'n'feel. But, keep the content based on what you have as it feels good, happy and fun.

Dr John S.