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=**Introduction to Games Design**=

**Design Docs feedback**
Ben Miller

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Such honesty - a game to waste time when bored in the office. I had such a game some years back and it had a one-button escape-flip to a built-in spreadsheet in case the boss came round. Careful with sounds in such games.

You are the only one so far who has noticed that Scratch runs on MS and Mac.

ooohh - they *are* just scribbles. And why not! Makes it look less like a game if the boss does catch you too. Watch the wobbly lines in Scratch as Scratch has problems with when-touching due to its internal polling system.

Your characters screen looks entirely professional as you have set the scene perfectly for it. Well done!

I *do* like the lined paper background. But I have doubts about sonic audio - perhaps go for scribble noise images.

Overall- very good idea and very do-able. try it out. What to add to document, not much, perhaps a detailed level. But possibly ore just vid and screen caps of the game running. I look forward to seeing it.

//Dr John.//