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=Introduction to Games Development=

Design Doc feedback
Mark Noble

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Supposed to be an online document (HTML pages) rather than a downloadable file ... oh, I click "Draft" at the top ... it's not very clear there, looks like you've just supplied John's favourite docx file and that's it, but I see the HTML version now.

Basic game idea, with a nice twist to it. Watch out for the anti-games mob coming to your door and telling you off for promoting drink, drugs, and fighting through your game :P

I get the game idea, it's been described quite well, but where's the pictures? Would be nice to see some concept art, screen layout, maybe even describe the audio and visual style. Would give the reader a better of idea of what the game will be like when it's finished. Also, make the age range a bit higher so folk my age can play it, as we'll also get the sense of humour.

Derek.