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=Introduction to Games Development=

Design Doc feedback
Giovanni Masucci

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Presentation of the online doc is a bit strange, mainly because you cheated and uploaded screen-grabs of your PDF :P. It's difficult to read at the small scale (if you're blind, like me) and awkward if you zoom in because you have to use the horizontal scroll bar. The doc itself looks nicely presented, but it's not very suitable for an online presentation where each user may have a different screen resolution.

"Itogade" - is the a play on "Intro to games development" or purely coincidental? // (It is indeed.... I wasunable to come up with a catchy name a​nd as I can get fixated on minor details to the detriment of the overall picture i plumped for the first cheatish method of making a name I could come up with -GM) // Big story, just scanned over it, but will read through at some point ... need to get all this feedback done first :)

Nothing much more to say as you seem to have covered all your bases. Very well laid out documentation detailing the game you intend to make so that anyone reading the document would have a good idea what the final product would be like. Just sort the online formatting // (I am slogging through the online formatting, just need to find a fast way to make webpages using my design and styles as a template with some rapidity to the process - GM) //

Derek.