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=**Introduction to Games Design**=

**Design Docs feedback**
Christoffer Pettersson

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What a strange, but accessible game. It all flows well, but would perhaps be better as either a multi-HTML-page site or a single PDF of multiple pages, as it does look hard on the eye as it is read.

Odd that the kangaroo only appears near the end. But its not in Australia - a kangaroo because it jumps? Probably OK and sensible in a way.

I wonder what would make this game stand out against other platform games. It has a back-story and quite a lot of complexity, so it will take a while to build in Scratch. It would be good to combine this document with a log and reflection on the game built and testing to see what came out as the hardest parts in developing the game.

Overall - a clear idea, well presented. Could do with some less-single-doc approach to selling it. And tell us its a kangaroo early on. mebbes spread some imagery around to lighten up the text too.

//Dr John.//