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=**Introduction to Games Design**=

**Design Docs feedback**
Shona Logan

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Nice opening screen; nice text font/graphics. Such a nice, simple game idea. if the plane falls out of the sky, what happens to any marmosets still on the plane? Do they just drop out to be caught ... sounds good.

The straight win/lose scenario, reminiscent of minesweeper is OK. Te back story is very 101 Dalmations too - cute things captured by evil person. Cuts very deep in the human psyche. Good idea & continuing good font/colours.

The proposed level design doesn't add much to the document, does it? And the bit on characters is also kinda repetitive of what was said earlier. Do you need to add some piccies here of the characters? I'm wondering at this stage what a marmoset actually looks like, real and sprite. What noises do they make? Do they have Big Eyes?

What an interesting idea to use the game as an ice breaker to start a discussion on marmosets. Sounds like a game that should be quick to build, as education never has enough money. Could you get zoos behind your game ideas? We could ask some - seriously, we could.

So - think about the purposes of this game. The basic idea is fine, but it needs thought out more as a purposeful game.

//Dr John.//