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=To Be Decided=

Tech Doc Feedback

 * readability - needs to be more technical and less bloggish; use tables, pictures and numbers too;


 * target platform - not sure if this is a good idea to choose Google Android, it may be cheap, but is there a market?


 * Staffing - ask yourself: what skills do we have & what skills do we need, can we fill the gaps, what do we need to buy in, how much will it cost/can we afford, etc.


 * costing - how do you know the Google Android is the cheapest option? Is it more expensive than the Nokia N900?


 * payback - try and simply have a set of targets, and good & bad expectations for payback

Summary - much more work required.

//Draft mark: 25%//

Final feedback: Having not seen the original tech document, I'm not sure if this is the improved version or the original resubmitted. Certainly, the above points still seem to be true, and there is some very basic wrong information (iPhone uses Objective C as main development platform) which you should have been able to find through minimal research.


 * Fina mark: 30%**