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=**Introduction to Game Design**=

**Game Design doc feedback**
Brandon Morris

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Small mismatch between general layout/fonts and navigation buttons. Stickman is an OK idea, but he needs a clearer backstory at the outset. Do you remember [|Vib Ribbon] ? When you say 'online' do you mean on a PC/Mac attached to a home internet, or a laptop using WiFi, or a mobile using ... ? Ta for the artwork, but we'd need to see a clip in action to see if just plain stickman+colour+face is enough to create the right gameplay feel. By the time I get to the last page (levels) it begins to feel like a game.

Overall: an OK idea, but you need to play on the cuteseyness of stickman. He's drawn badly, lacks any powerful features, but you need to feel attache to him. What would the music and sound fx be like? How long would a level last? Would you sell it, and how much for. Sounds like a mobile AppStore game for such as the newly released Nokia N900. If sold properly as a game idea and as a good game, this could have cult appeal.

//Dr John.//